Reviews by Kumohime

Kumohime Dec 07, 2014 - Christmas in Summer by Lil Daisy - Chapter 1: Surprise!

aaww so cute.... but that costume in the Australian summer no, no, no.
Great job!

Kumohime Dec 07, 2014 - Do You Want to Build a Snowman? by FeliciaSueLynn - Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aaww, cute, watching friends build a snowman, something I've never done hahaha

Kumohime Dec 07, 2014 - Santa Surprise by Chrisa - Chapter 1: Santa Surprise

LOL this was really funny and the pics are perfect for it.

Kumohime Dec 07, 2014 - Gingerbread Surprise by Dreamy Luna - Chapter 1: Gingerbread Surprise

aawww such a cute ending!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Hime! ^_^

Kumohime Dec 07, 2014 - Candy Crushed by englishrose85 - Chapter 1: Candy Crushed

Such a sad first story. Good job!

Kumohime Sep 01, 2014 - Fish Out of Water by Lil Daisy - Chapter 1: Making a Beginning

OMG! You left me wanting for more!!!
I absolutly loved it! It was so well written, and the characters were perfect. Hime is a bit a Tom boy but not a cliche, and Tego's character was so well described as well. And Koyama appearance was awesome.
It's great the way you really wrote some of the points in the story, like how they meet, a surf accident instead of a shipwreck for example.
You did an amazing job, so much better than I could have imagine.
Thank you so much! It was a great beginning, I wonder if Hime would believe his story... you really got me wanting for more hahaha
Again, thank you so much, it was a great job!

Kumohime Aug 18, 2014 - Do You Want Me? by JumpIntoMyCore - Chapter 2: I don't want an apology.

Very interesting story. I like both characters, yes even the stupid sport star bullying the girl he likes. I wonder if they just left it at that or if something more happened afterwards... he did apologized rather quickly.

Anyway, enough with my pointless rant, really good story, and a great use of the prompt!
Author's Response: To be honest, I'm pretty ashamed of this story. XD It was actually supposed to be so much more than this, but the plot just fell out of my head. So I rushed to finish it, and well, this is what happened. But thank you for reading! It means a lot.

Kumohime Aug 18, 2014 - His Happy Ending by JumpIntoMyCore - Chapter 2: *BONUS* The Proposal.

Yay! I love second parts!

Wow he really went overboard with the proposal, sooo cheesyly cute! Hahaha

Very cute story. Good job!
Author's Response: Yeah, he really went all out. XD But as Kristy's wife, you should know that she deserves the best, even proposal wise. XD Anyhoodles, thank you for reading! *hearts*

Kumohime Aug 18, 2014 - His Happy Ending by JumpIntoMyCore - Chapter 1: Blind Date.

It's the first time I notice this story!!! You need to start posting your updates on Facebook or something! Cause this is really cute and I almost miss it. Haha

Ok, the story was so cute. Clumsy Jerry was really funny. And they had broken up? Well, if their reaction was any indication, ending the relationship had been a big mistake xD Or maybe it hadn't been the right time.

Aanywaay, it was very nicely written and it was a very cute story. Great job! I bet Kristy loved it xD
Author's Response: I would, but I don't make posters. XD Yay though! I'm glad you think it's cute. That's what I was going for, that their breakup was over something stupid, and that neither of them wanted it to be permanent. Thank you for reading! And saying that it was nicely written, it means a lot! *huggles*

Kumohime Aug 18, 2014 - Enter At Own Risk by SimpleSnow, JumpIntoMyCore - Chapter 30: Cowards.

Yeah, cause looking for pics of hot Asian guys is such an imposition! And I offered you dummy.
Awww Massu, now that he confessed to Ryo, of course he's Ok with Kristy and Henry Lol. And by the way, will Ryo ever answer?? Or are we all pretending it didn't happen??
Why aren't Snow and Koyama together? They are so cute.
Aaww Tegoshi saw her. A bit stalkerish but aww. Again with moving in; how about dating first or something (as the Hime in the story, I have commitment issues Lol)
So... what's next? There are a lot of lose ends!
Can't wait for the next update! Let me know and I'll help you kick that writer's block butt! XD
Very nice update!

I found a couple typing mistakes:

"At the risk of sounding like a fool;" wouldn't a comma be better?
"pry the boards of" boards off
"longer were in this house" we're
"reason as to why and I met?” you and I "else who entered in" isn't the in redundant? I would just say entered it.
"want to be with you whether were inside" we're
"person once were out of this house?” we're
"we found you one the floor-“ you on
Author's Response: Well still! Thank you, for being so awesome. You'll see what happens between those two soon. I had to separate them once more, because I didn't know who else to put Massu with. At least he didn't follow her! That'd be stalkerish. XD Well, I guess he figures, they already have the living together part down, since they've been stuck in a house for who knows how long. I'll tie those loose ends up! Don't worry. Thank you for reading! And showing me the mistakes, mahn, I made a lot, didn't I? XD Stupid writers block!