Reviews For Ashes to Ashes

Kristy reviewed Burn on Mar 22, 2013 11:47 PM [Report This]

Ikuta, you let Lillith go RIGHT NOW! Or else I'll jump into this story and set her free myself! I'm just kidding- but honestly, the way you wrote that scene in the beginning got my attention really fast. It's amazing how you can evoke such strong feelings in your readers, that means you're a skilled writer, author-ssi! Anyways, back to the story. The passionate scene between Ikuta and Lillith was fascinating. They loved each other enough to (almost) perform physical love, but yet still detested and distrusted the other. Would that be lust? I have no clue! Though I love how spunky Lillith didn't go down without a fight- she took a huge bite out of his arm before getting knocked out. That's true tenacity! I loved this chapter, and I hope you update soon, author-ssi!
Author's Response: KRISTYYY *hugs* thank you for reading and reviewing love! And lol trust Toma is scared of your threats for shizzle! Or well..lets be honest he's scared of how good Henry is with a knife XD because he'll be coming with you!

Thank you for calling me skilled :) this is one of my favourite stories so getting this compliment here means so much! Yeah they're not going to be going through with any real physical love for a long time...but their feelings for each other are very complicated. I'm glad that even though Rie's perspective is so distorted and limiting you can see that Toma does care for her! LOL i also have no clue how to name what they're feeling for each other right now XD

And yes! A lesson for the future should your boyfriend try to drug you XD bite him!

Thank you for you love! I hope you enjoy the new update :D!

maohartjun reviewed Burn on Jan 06, 2013 03:49 PM [Report This]

HAPPY NEW YEARS Anna.

Loving the update.

WOW intense and scary. What's up with Toma (I mean I know but) he's like a psycho.

Oh I hope nothing had happened to Rie.

Update needed pls pls haha *winks*
Author's Response: Maohartjun! HAPPY NEW YEARS TO YOU TOOO :D (btw thank you for reviewing GStar and Impure Intentions in advance :) I'll reply when I'm updating those two stories) And I'm so happy you loved this update! It was one of the ones I was very scared about while writing it T.T I've never written anything like this. As for what's up with Toma XD since I told Christine I'll tell you as well :) the problem with writing AtoA I've found is that I stick mostly to Rie's point of view so everything Toma does comes off crazy and without a reason because we never get to see his reasoning. or Toma attacking her...he has his reasons. Not very strong ones in the chapter so I'll explain it here :) SO DON'T READ THIS REPLY BEFORE THE STORY OKAY? okay now that you've read the chapter - Toma thought that she was part of Yamashita's clan and had infiltrated his club to find out about the shipment (Shige's words in that previous chapter etc. made him think this way). Attacking her and locking her was a way of scaring her into admitting to him what she was doing here...as for the kiss...sigh. We'll get into that more later but Toma honestly did think that she wanted it or he wouldn't have kissed her. (Trust me the irony of her trying to run away from him and him kissing her is not lost on me, but the way they were behaving before they started running and fighting, teasing each other about heartbeats and feelings -> that's what made him feel like kissing her...and he himself hadn't realized that he was nervous around her which is why when they're kissing Rie talks about his hands shake when he touches her because he knows he shouldn't be. So every shake of his hand is like - a reminder to him that he needs to lift himself off her) does that help a bit? T.T sorry if it's long! but I hope it helps :)! Keep asking me questions though! It helps me realize where there are flaws and where I can make things more clearer when I edit the story :)! Rie is always scared something will happen to her XD but don't worry nothing will happen to her yet. I hope you enjoy the update! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)! *hugs*

Christine reviewed Burn on Dec 28, 2012 02:30 PM [Report This]

OMFGGGG
THIS WAS SERIOUSLY INTENSE!!!!
WOW

Their relationship is so twisted...

what the fuck was Toma thinking attacking her like that?
and Rie...she wants it and she doesnt?

It's like she hasn't admitted to herself that she is fucking attracted to him...because when she will admit it she is going to be disgusted with herself because he is everything she hates and wants to protect the people against I guess....

Toma is fucking sexy...black polo and jeans...yummy hehehehe

OMg omg...
OMG HE DRUGGED HER!!!!
WHAT THE FUCK IS HE THINKING?

UPDATE SOON!

THIS IS SO INTENSE I HELD MY BREATH WHILE READING!!!!

I LOVE YOU

and why aren't we going to talk??? D:
Author's Response: WASN'T IT? T.T KYAH. Christine I think I have a seriously problem now with writing...what if I can no longer write cute humor filled fun stories that make people happy T.T? so sad.



But yes.. I feel sad saying this but in this story Rie and Toma will probably never have a normal relationship. As for Toma attacking her...he has his reasons. Not very strong ones in the chapter so I'll explain it here :) SO DON'T READ THIS REPLY BEFORE THE STORY OKAY? okay now that you've read the chapter - Toma thought that she was part of Yamashita's clan and had infiltrated his club to find out about the shipment (Shige's words in that previous chapter etc. made him think this way). Attacking her and locking her was a way of scaring her into admitting to him what she was doing here...as for the kiss...sigh. We'll get into that more later but Toma honestly did think that she wanted it or he wouldn't have kissed her. (Trust me the irony of her trying to run away from him and him kissing her is not lost on me, but the way they were behaving before they started running and fighting, teasing each other about heartbeats and feelings -> that's what made him feel like kissing her...and he himself hadn't realized that he was nervous around her which is why when they're kissing Rie talks about his hands shake when he touches her because he knows he shouldn't be. So every shake of his hand is like - a reminder to him that he needs to lift himself off her)



RIE...dear god this lady. Yes. Rie you got down exactly. She is disgusted with herself, but now she's at that point where denial and ignoring is no longer possible so we'll start seeing her be a lot more honest with herself about her feelings no matter that she hates the type of guy Toma is



I wanted to show how relaxed Toma was in comparison to Jun later :D you'll see what I mean (he's wearing the same clothes throughout the next chapter btw) but yesss so yummy.



I'M SO AMPED YOU WERE HOLDING YOUR BREATH (but don't faint! :O)



I guess since it's a story about drugs Rie should be drugged at least once XD?



I LOVE YOU TOOO! THANK YOU FOR YOUR AWESOME REVIEW AND READING AND I HOPE YOU ENJOY THE NEXT CHAPTER BB <3~!



Lil Daisy reviewed Burn on Dec 27, 2012 02:51 AM [Report This]

hot chapter! and the suspense!
Author's Response: Yes! lol the two themes that were like T.T a huge struggle for me before so I'm glad you thought it was hot and suspenseful! The hotness is a bit toned down in the next chapter but the suspense is definitely there so I hope you can enjoy it :) thank you for reading and reviewing Daisy!! I hope you're doing well it's been a while since we talked :(

Ninner reviewed Burn on Dec 26, 2012 11:58 PM [Report This]

"Fuck you Ikuta." "You almost did."

THAT LITERALLY MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD AND I AM SORRY BUT I ALWAYS SAY THAT OMG

THIS SCENE WAS SO INTENSE ~ KYAAA ~ I JUST ABSOLUTELY LOVED IY!

IT WAS SO WELL WRITTEN AND THE DESCRIPTIONS OF THEIR BODIES AGAINST ONE ANOTHER'S WAS JUST SO PERFECT.

SERIOUSLY THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHAPTERS.

CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE.
Author's Response: EMMAAAAA my love! <3 First off thank you for reading :) and also LOL YOU SAY THAT XD! When ?! You must be having some steamy times if you're saying that ;). The intensity is exactly what I wanted to portray :D! (and shhh don't let the other chapters know! they'll get jealous but its one of my favourites too :D) Hope you enjoy the next chapter! Thank you for your review! *hugs*
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