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Ooper reviewed Opportunities on May 02, 2012 08:06 PM [Report This]

OFF TO REAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD MORE. *hugs and hearts*
Author's Response: OPPORTUNITIES HAS MORE ACTION! DOESN'T IT DOESN'T IT? Yeah well its as much action as I could muster at that point :( Koyama's a very interesting character too (DON'T READ THE REVIEWS) but yeah. He's only briefly mentioned here but he gets bigger as time goes on. All the characters end up getting a lot more developed as time goes on :) so I hope you'll enjoy that Tali! huge hugs and hearts. Thank you for reading and reviewing :) <3 it really means a lot!!

inawza reviewed Opportunities on Mar 01, 2011 11:34 AM [Report This]

first of all...yay you for updating...
not only one but two chapters...
and i love you so much more now :)
ugh matsumoto jun kinda irritated me for a while there...when he was supposed to be scary...
and gosh...wana is toma's half-sister?
wooo...thats...thats unexpected...
lucky her for having a drools-magnet brother... :p
jaejong and seunghyun? LOL
awww does that means rie and wana cant be friends anymore?just because she's toma's sister?ah too bad...coz i really think rie needs someone other than mukai by her side...
AKANISHI JIN... *blushes*
Author's Response: Yeeeee two chapters =DD I love writing this story so =D double updates are definitely in order but not today. Still attempt to love me T.T LOL. He irritated you? Was it cause he was acting too bossy? Somewhat fake? I can see that happening actually. And yeahhh you're Toma's half-sister =D you'll find out your family background very soon =D LOL drools magnet...oh bb <3 just wait till you see what we've got planned for Wana =D I'm still not sure exactly how the friendship will pan out because I have a couple of ideas for it =D but you'll see =P AKANISHI JIN =D Dude. I listened to his song at work and I giggled so much my friend looked at me and asked me if my boyfriend left me a voicemail or something. I WAS SO TEMPTED TO SAY YES. I was listening to love juice. imagine that as a voicemail *drool* BUT JIN IS WANA'S MAN. Not mine! So I'll imagine Toma leaving me a message like that. Thanks for reading Wana =D <3

Christine reviewed Opportunities on Feb 28, 2011 11:54 AM [Report This]

OMG
WANA IS TOMA'S SISTER?
I did not see that coming...brilliant move girl.
Also...omg Jun's encounter with Rie...was effin scary man...
I was like OMG NOOO RIE SHUT UP!!!! D:
but im glad he didnt really do much except yell at her.
toma toma toma...how come you are such a mysterious character?
AND I LOVE YOU TOMA IN A NON SEXUAL WAY BECAUSE YOUR WIFE WOULD KILL ME BUT I LOVE MY BFF AND HE IS SO SEXY IN THIS STORY YAY!!!
I cant wait ill rie and toma do it...LOL random i know but i wanted to write that...
*NEXT*
Author's Response: YES =D SEE NOW IT ALL MAKES PERFECT SENSE DOESN'T IT? But yeah. they're siblings that's why they're so close but I haven't really shown that yet right? Dude I don't want this to accidentally end up being one of those stories where you know OMG EVERYONE'S FALLING IN LOVE WITH MY OC LOL SO MUCH FUN. But Jun is pervy when it comes to Rie but he's not interested in her at all. It's all a bit of a game to him. =D I LOVE JUN. yes no sexual way! I would totally kill you! LOL YOU SAY THAT EVERY REVIEW. It makes me all happy and gooey. *NEXT*

Lil Daisy reviewed Opportunities on Feb 28, 2011 04:20 AM [Report This]

hait, Matsumoto Jun sama ^^
Author's Response: LOL you cutie! I bet if you ever said that to him he'd start drooling and smiling foolishly. I DON'T KNOW WHY I HAVE SUCH AN UNCOOL IMAGE OF HIM T.T <3 but it makes me love him more to have that sort of image so XD.
Author's Response: LOL you cutie! I bet if you ever said that to him he'd start drooling and smiling foolishly. I DON'T KNOW WHY I HAVE SUCH AN UNCOOL IMAGE OF HIM T.T <3 but it makes me love him more to have that sort of image so XD.
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