Reviews For Runaway Daughter

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 10 "Skating" on Jun 25, 2013 06:12 PM [Report This]

Kumiko is annoying me more and more xD hahaha...
And Ayumu too actually! Why can't see just be with Hiro already, she knows she wants to, and I'm sure he won't object.

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 09 "Nearly Caught" on Jun 25, 2013 05:55 PM [Report This]

I feel like Kumiko is now turning into something bad... It's starting to happen.

“I thought it was only me,” Shun said. “I thought I felt her presence close by.”

“I didn’t feel anything!” Toma exclaimed feeling left out.

TOMA IS SO CUTE! AWWW!!!

Auymu and Hiro are really falling for each other :3 So cute.

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 08 "First Day" on Jun 25, 2013 05:32 PM [Report This]

KUMIKO! STOP DREAMING ABOUT HIRO. HE DOESN'T LIKE YOU.
*sighs* She's starting to get on my nerves!
And the bodyguards are really close to finding her now! It's like a DUN DUN DUN DUNNN -moment.

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 07 "Great Opportunity" on Jun 25, 2013 05:16 PM [Report This]

It still took her a while to realize it was Hiro's company hahaha. Hiro is really infatuated with her. And now they will be working together :D *waiting for there to be progress in their relationship*

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 06 "Job Hunting" on Jun 25, 2013 05:10 PM [Report This]

Kumiko seems nice here but since i've read this before i am now skeptical. I find it funny Ayumu doesn't think it could be Hiro xD i mean him having a private jet kind of implies he's rich...
And now they're gonna meet :D at least if i remember correctly!

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 05 "Missing Her" on Jun 25, 2013 05:04 PM [Report This]

Yamapi is such a funny character! And god Cecilia and Kristy *shakes head* Some girls just can't let it be.
I love that Hiro is still thinking about Ayu. Soon they'll meet hehehe...

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 04 "On the Plane" on Jun 25, 2013 04:51 PM [Report This]

Ayumu is so curious about everything! But I guess she really hasn't had a chance to talk to people a lot before? Maybe that's partly the reason why she never shut ups now xD AND SHE WAS SO ADORABLE WHEN SHE KISSED HIM BEFORE THEY PARTED!!

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 03 "Airport" on Jun 25, 2013 04:44 PM [Report This]

Ayu is so cute now! And I love their meeting xD The wink was hilarious since she kinda blew her chances of acting apologetic all at once.
I can't wait for them to reach the states :D
And poor bodyguards... I dont know if i should say that though... Since i'm on Ayumu's side :D

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 02 "Meeting Hiro Mizushima" on Jun 25, 2013 04:35 PM [Report This]

I love Ayu's escape xD And how she meets Hiro.
My favorite part in this chapter is probably where Ayu says “I just found out that I don’t have a limousine".
I thought it was hilarious. And then she kisses Hiro~

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed Chapter 01 "Running Away" on Jun 25, 2013 04:25 PM [Report This]

Ah~ I remember this! I really felt with her when she got angry at her father. And the body guards that follow her around must drive her mad.
The father just doesn't even try to understand what she is feeling and it annoys me...
The part about the body guards being like men in black ads a nice touch of humor ^^
I feel like Ayumu was so smart to be able to escape. She must've been very desperate... poor girl. :D but now the fun will begin!
(btw I think you write the bodyguards' point of view nicely. They aren't her friends and don't even really know her so even though they feel sorry for her a bit, it's not enough to make her life any easier)
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