Kumiko seems nice here but since i've read this before i am now skeptical. I find it funny Ayumu doesn't think it could be Hiro xD i mean him having a private jet kind of implies he's rich... And now they're gonna meet :D at least if i remember correctly!
Ayumu is so curious about everything! But I guess she really hasn't had a chance to talk to people a lot before? Maybe that's partly the reason why she never shut ups now xD AND SHE WAS SO ADORABLE WHEN SHE KISSED HIM BEFORE THEY PARTED!!
Ayu is so cute now! And I love their meeting xD The wink was hilarious since she kinda blew her chances of acting apologetic all at once. I can't wait for them to reach the states :D And poor bodyguards... I dont know if i should say that though... Since i'm on Ayumu's side :D
I love Ayu's escape xD And how she meets Hiro. My favorite part in this chapter is probably where Ayu says “I just found out that I don’t have a limousine". I thought it was hilarious. And then she kisses Hiro~
Ah~ I remember this! I really felt with her when she got angry at her father. And the body guards that follow her around must drive her mad. The father just doesn't even try to understand what she is feeling and it annoys me... The part about the body guards being like men in black ads a nice touch of humor ^^ I feel like Ayumu was so smart to be able to escape. She must've been very desperate... poor girl. :D but now the fun will begin! (btw I think you write the bodyguards' point of view nicely. They aren't her friends and don't even really know her so even though they feel sorry for her a bit, it's not enough to make her life any easier)