Ezdaahaaa reviewed Chapter 2: Truth Be Told on Jul 17, 2013 10:15 AM [Report This]

UP-DATE UP-DATE UP-DATE!!!
Please up-date, this is really good!
~Suzy

suikko reviewed Chapter 2: Truth Be Told on May 31, 2012 02:30 PM [Report This]

Great start ! More please ;))

cdrooks11820 reviewed Chapter 1: Moving In on May 24, 2011 01:16 AM [Report This]

This was a good beginning, I can't wait to read more. :D
-- classic criminal

-- classic criminal reviewed Chapter 2: Truth Be Told on May 21, 2011 01:10 PM [Report This]

Chapter 2:
Here I am again ;)
It's shorter than the previous one :(
LOL, jk. I know that it's hard to write a consistent amount the whole time :p
anyway, I like it and I'm dying to know why Jung Min "kidnapped" her ;)
-- classic criminal

-- classic criminal reviewed Chapter 1: Moving In on May 21, 2011 01:07 PM [Report This]

Chapter 1:
I like the story but could you please refrain from switching back and forth between first and third person? It's slightly confusing and I don't think it's necesarry :)
Other than that: Great story!
On to the next chapter ;)

gofiction reviewed Chapter 2: Truth Be Told on Sep 24, 2010 01:33 PM [Report This]

like it! :D
please make moreeee... I'm really curious about it!
anyway, you make a good intro in chapter 1! :D

Librajem reviewed Chapter 2: Truth Be Told on Jul 26, 2010 05:44 PM [Report This]

Good story

kenji reviewed Chapter 1: Moving In on Jun 13, 2010 04:35 AM [Report This]

I like your story the first chapter was good.
Author's Response: Thank you, very much!
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