Reviews For I Got Hurt

Kumohime reviewed Chapter One. on Jul 18, 2014 08:41 PM [Report This]

Oh my god! The Ryo-Massu story!! You have to tell me when you post woman!!! Ok, I calmed down hehe
Aaawww, Shige and Pi?? I like that couple too xDD.
I love how you described Tegomasu and how the learn the job xD
Massu is married?!?!?! Phew, you scared me.
I loooove Shige and Pi. Love them. Come on Pi, give up and date poor Shige.
That's it? Damn you Ryo! Ask for a phone number!! Massu has to do something! Ceil! You can not do this to me again! No, I demand (yes demand) a second part! Start writing young lady!
I really liked the story and how it was written and the descriptions (in spite of my outburst just now, it's just, they always end up in nothing, the other story had a similar ending. Damn you people who hate happy endings - you, Chrisa, Cherry, even Kristy - damn...

Sorry for the rant again. Great job, really!! I don't remember the challenge though. Well, anyway, awesome job... Sorry if I keep complaining next time we talk... I really thought those two were going somewhere... *sigh* If you don't give them a happy ending, I will!

Sorry, this comment is weird and all over the place, I blame hormones... I'm extra sensitive today heheh, I'll stop here. Again, great job! *hugs*
Author's Response: You don't know how much it means to me that you got excited over a story I wrote. XD Because one, as you know I have major confidence issues, and two, because you're an amazing writer, and your comments always make my day better, whether they're compliments or criticisms you really do help me out a lot. *huggles* Anyway, enough of being weird and mushy. I always picture Pi and Shige as the friends who are always hassling Ryo and flirting with each other even though they'll never get together. XD Do you really ship ShigePi? If you got scared, imagine how Ryo felt when that was the first thing he had heard Shige say. XD I'm glad you liked Shige and Pi in this story, but Pi won't be broken that easily! Actually the other night at work I was inspired to write a second part to this, but I didn't know if I should or not. But since you demanded, I started writing it last night, it's a work in progress, but it's getting there. XD Yay! You said you liked the descriptions in my story! Am I getting better with them? (I got a little excited for a second) I actually didn't put Ryo and Massu together because of my first RyoMassu drabble, like you said, they didn't end up in that one either. I don't know why, but in these stories, I like ending them in heartbreak for Ryo.... is that mean? We can't help it! Sad endings are just too good, sometimes. XD You'll give them a happy ending? XD Well once I'm done with the second part, you'll just have to see if they get somewhere or not. muahahahahaha. *cough* Nah, I really liked this review! It made me so happy. And thank you for saying a did a great job, and for even reading this! It means so much to me. *huggles even tighter* (by the way, the challenge was "just don't get hurt" and instead of molding the plot around that sentence, I just made one of the characters say it, because I'm lazy. *nods*)
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