Reviews For The First Morning

cahaya reviewed The First Morning on Jun 26, 2014 10:45 AM [Report This]

beautifully written...
never expect the ending gonna be like that ...
thought she gonna end up with him ...kindda sad when she had to let him go ...uwaaa :(
Author's Response: Thank you. It really means a lot. I wanted a happy ending too, but it just didn't work that way for some reason. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

YoonEunHyeFan reviewed The First Morning on Jun 26, 2014 02:27 AM [Report This]

Oh that started out really sweet and now I want to cry for her. Sucks to lose someone you love. Awesome job!
Author's Response: I wanted a happy ending too, but for some reason it didn't work. But I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting!

Kristy reviewed The First Morning on Jun 26, 2014 02:09 AM [Report This]

I don't know whether to be sad or happy!! Conflicted right now. While I'm glad that the brother finally found his love (that was an implied marriage, right?), it seems that he was reluctant to do so? As if he, too, had a one-sided crush on his younger sibling? There's so much hidden that would make for an excellent back story, ahahaha!

For me, I read it as a yaoi story. Maybe because that's namely what I write, but it just had that 'forbidden love' sort of aire that's usually surrounding the genre. Hmm. But good job, nevertheless!!
Author's Response: It's more like he cares for his little brother, and I wanted to keep the story a little mysterious, that's why there is so much unsaid (but implied, I hope) And who knows, I might end up writing the rest of the story hahahaha (after we are done with BMR) And, honestly, I wrote it thinking about yaoi at first (since the prompt image seemed to be two boys) but then I realized it could work both ways. Thank you for commenting! Means a lot wifey :)
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