Man Jace sounds perfect. (mostly because I'm thinking of him as the TMI Jace XD)
but man dude...this was so heart breaking too (little less heart breaking than the other one :D i didn't cry! yayy no tears!) and I liked that it wrapped up with a happier ending :D it left me feeling good at the end of it because even Christine was interested in him and kyaa it was perfect!
Great job Tali :D! I can't wait to read more of these :)
Yeah so I honestly just sat here and cried...alot.
Like next level tears. (lol get it? next level? cause that's the level she's on?)
I don't know what to say. I'm really sad mostly. I'm going to have to reread this one day with a less sad eye but man (drownseyeballs in tears)
Okay no wait, I'll try and read it again now. That's just stupid to read it again days later.
First I thought Haruka was their child who was sleeping between them, but a little later I figured it out obviously.
Man just Tali you took my heart out and stomped on it a lot but in a really beautiful way. And like man T.T he still has the picture in the wallet and gah and their new relationship and the other ghosts and T.T I can't I can't I'm starting to cry again.
So I'm just going to say this was really really beautiful and I really enjoyed reading this
Ahhhhh!!!!!! Omggggg!!!! I loved this LOVED IT! From the adorable cakes to the adorable guy in the tux :P I could so understand her feelings when she saw Jace with Jennifer :( The broken heart and illusion of something more is so sad :( But I'm happy she got to meet Tomo :P Thank you so much bb Beautifully written
Oh, god!! This was so beautiful! I almost cried (and I rarely cry over story so if you almost made me cried it's huge!) In such a short story you conveyed so much. You feel for all the the characters, Lillith, Toma and even Haruka, even if she has no idea. Great job and I'm really looking forward to the series!