First of all, let me get this out there: KYAAAAAAAAA!!!! IT'S YAOI! :)
And now for a more mature review: I really liked the characters you used, but I am probably NEWS biased. Massu is my muse, too. XD
The story turned out brilliantly, too. Even though the story isn't elaborately descriptive, the implied content through the first person and slight omniscient perspective lends to a more imtimate feel. The ending is left slightly up to interpretation (Does that mean he isn't going to confess!?!) I believe it enhaces the story's signifcance. We've all experiencd that feeling of crushing nervousness when confessing, and Ryo just makes it all too real.
Anyways, foryour first drabble on this couple, you did a fantastic job! I loved it, and all of your literary techniques you used. (Okay, I am a bit of a nerd, but I love finding the symbolism and everything else in the text!) Two thumbs up!
Author's Response: Yep! Thought I'd throw a yoai into this mix. Seems like mine was the first, and the last. I'm glad you liked the characters, I'm actually a really big shipper of RyoMassu, of course after I ship KristyMassu. Apparently a lot of people are asking for a second part to this drabble, so I'm going to write it, and maybe even a third, so if you'd like to know what happens please look forward to them.^^ Thank you for saying I did a fantastic job! I wasn't actually very happy with this to be honest, since I only wrote it in ten minutes. Anyhoodles thank you for the review!