Uh-oh, we've got some (friendly) competition between the guys over a silly misunderstanding.
And Massu's the one throwing up? Henry's in pain? Wait, where am I? What's going on? And why is Ryo hurting Henry? I'm sad now, my babies are sad and hurt.
Tegoshi really is just like a little kid! Pouting and asking if he's clueless; no wonder why Hime really likes him. I feel like you've given her a motherly, maternal feel in this story which really blends well with Tegoshi's childish character. I'm sure that a lot more could have been said about their relationship, but not much has developed yet! I'm still waiting for a Hime X Tegoshi kiss to break out!!!
I know everyone's trying desperately to find out who the culprit is, but I feel like they're going about it the wrong way. They should be non-confrontational and keep an open mind!!!
Ryo's admittance of his feelings really shows his own maturity. It's alright to be scared- we all are, sometimes. But you know, you just got to fight back harder? You can't give up- there's people out there (AKA MASSU!) who are waiting for you to give them a sign, any sign, that someone's still in there and is responsive. And that, ladies and gentlemen, was Kristy's motivational speech of the day.
Over and out. See you in the next chappe!!
(But no seriously, who is that guy that the mystery man wants? I guess I'll have to find out...!)
Author's Response: Haruma is just being a prat and trying to push Ryo. Stupid head Haruma. Massu is throwing up because he was upset, and Ryo is squeezing Henry's hand a little too hard because of the name that was just mentioned. It's all just one big crazy mess. I'm glad you think I mend their characters well, because so far the TegoHime couple is the only one I've been doing remotely well at developing. They do everything wrong in that house, let's hope sooner or later they learn. He'll get over Koki sooner or later, with a certain persons help' like you said. XD You saying over and out reminded me of walkie talkies.... mahn I'm old. Moving on to the next review! XD