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Kristy reviewed You're wrong. on Apr 18, 2014 04:42 AM [Report This]

You know, in every story, you just got to have that special gay couple. Because love transcends all boundaries, and also statistically speaking- 1 in 10 of us will probably be some form of the LGBTQIA* acronym one day. But that's just me being philosophical and happy that we have a YAOI COUPLE.

So you know how I was super behind on my reading of your chapters? Well, it makes sense now- you said that you had writer's block some time around now! Well, considering how I have a good number of chapters ahead of me, congratulations for getting out of your writer's block! And, on this cheerful note, we will turn to the story:

Wait, why is Ceil, Kristy, Snow, Massu, and Henry leaving? This seems a bit suspicious. And you can't leave Cherry and Hime alone with all of those men; they're wild! :O

Henry and Ryo holding hands...? Woah, now I'm getting fired up. And Ryo's the one who instigated it. Wait, wasn't he the one who Massu likes? And why is he holding hands with Henry? Is this.... a love SQUARE?!

Wait, there's 5 people in this relationship: Me, Henry, Massu, Ryo, and Haruma. I think the proper terminology would be a pentagon~

Tanaka Koki? Who's that? The name sounds really familiar. Hm...

Cute that Haruma's trying to prevent Massu from seeing Henry and Ryo holding hands, but it's sad that he failed. Though it only adds more to the drama unfolding!!! This chapter was a wonderful update; and it doesn't matter if it's short. Because I still have a lot more to go!!!
Author's Response: Yay for philosophical comments and Yaoi! XD Koyama left with them too, don't forget Koyama! XD Tegoshi will protect Hime, and Pi will protect Cherry, don't worry they're covered. Ryo's upset, his best friend is hurt and can't move, don;t be mad at the guy for needing support, and Henry just happened to be the one there with him. Well if you want to get technical Koki is now an ex member of kattun. *ugly sobs* Stupid JE for kicking him out! But in the story, he's got something to do with Ryo. I'm glad you liked this chapter, I had such little confidence in it! I'll move on to your other reviews now!^^

ichigoyamada reviewed You're wrong. on Dec 04, 2013 03:38 AM [Report This]

After 1 month, you've finally updated it, and you gave me a short update?! D: *cries*

But it's better than nothing :D so I forgive you *hearts*

I love you too and I enjoyed this chapter :) so, please update soon 'kay? Thank you and *huggles*
Author's Response: Yes! I'm sorry. Ive not been a very good writer lately. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! *huggles real tight* Thank you for the review, and I hope to update soon, hopefully this one won't take a month. XD

Uniquemikoto reviewed You're wrong. on Dec 02, 2013 06:32 PM [Report This]

I REVIEWED FINALLY!
Hahahahaha xD I love how random people names come in an awkward(?) moment xD
anywaay, you finally updated!! ~ the update that I longed for xD
Please update soon =3=
Thank you for this chapter~
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for reviewing! *hearts* Yep, names just pop up in the worst situations to make them even worse. Muahahahaha! Anyhoodles, I'm sorry this update wasn't the greatest after the other two chapters. I promise the others will be better though! Please look forward to them, and thank you again! *huggles*

Kumohime reviewed You're wrong. on Dec 01, 2013 12:06 AM [Report This]

Yes! Too short!! I want to know what the heck is going on! hahah
But, seriously, thank you for the update xD
I'll be waiting to see what happens and what Koki has to do with anything.
Nice chapter! :D
Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapters! I'll start working on them now. Thank you for the review! *hearts* Yes, please look forward to what happens next, and what Koki's role is in this, and Shige's too. In case you forgot about him. xD Anyhoodles, before I reveal anything to you, I'm going to say thank you again! *millions of hearts and huggles*
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