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Kristy reviewed A Family Symbol? on Dec 01, 2013 04:32 AM [Report This]

Dang it, in my last review, it cut off the rest of my words because I may or may not have accidentally put in a little heart.... *grins* I didn't say much that was worth reading, anyways. :P

Oh yeah, I remember what I said- something about sitting on guys laps and me saying "Touche"? Looks like a little jabberjay picked up on my little catchphrase! I suppose I say it often enough for you to catch on, anyways XD (And the laps part- yes, sitting on males are typically more comfortable than sitting on couches. Proven and effective. I suppose females would be the same, but I've never tried! XD)

And to the new review, we go:

Ryo is such a little bossypants! And the rest of them are just going to follow what he's saying? Geez. :P I don't like it! But since he's Cherry's friend *rolls eyes in frustration* I suppose I'll have to get used to him. *le heave of thy heavy sigh*

Look at them go! Family symbol, crest, etc. is going to help them understand more of what they're dealing with! I suppose Ryo is smart about something- I say that we keep him around. Funny thing is that "Ryo" starts with a "R".... *thinks hard*

"'He's protective by nature,' Snow smiled. 'Once he'd met you, he's risk his life for you.'" OH DON'T EVEN. This little nugget was threatening to bale on us last chapter. Eyyy, don't think I've have forgotten for one. single. second.

Look at Ceil growing a spine! Declaring her un-dollness state and everything, she's such a rebel! You know, with all of these search groups wandering this house, it has to make me question- how big is this place really, and is it bigger on the inside than it is on the outside? Like magic? Hm....

With that pondering thought, I'm off to the next chapter. Hopefully, we'll find out more about the mysterious family crest! O_o
Author's Response: Jabberjay? xD Yes, I thought I'd throw that "touche" in there, since i like to add stuff that can make the characters relate-able as possible. Maybe I'm weird, but I don't like sitting on guys laps, I think it's weird, but I've let plenty of my boyfriends sit on my lap, and aside from the fact that it should be the other way around, they said it was comfortable. XD I think you got confused again, cause' it was Pi being bossy again, and he's cherry's friend, not Ryo. I say we keep Ryo around too. XD Koyama was actually going to take that man/thing on so that everyone could get out safely, so in a sense he was protecting them all. The house is MUCH bigger on the inside than on the outside. Plus, one search group is upstairs and one is down, so that helps too. Anyhoodles, I look forward to your next reviews and thank you for this review. *hearts*

Eyeslikeatoms reviewed A Family Symbol? on Oct 07, 2013 03:47 PM [Report This]

OOOH OOOH! Are they onto something?? Are they? TELL MEEE!!!
Koyama is a bit too confident in getting everyone out... hmm...
Hahahahah xD they managed to separate Hime and Tegoshi for a moment? I can imagine Tegoshi resisting.
Author's Response: I can't tell yooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuu. XD Ohh, you thinking Koyama is suspicious?? Hmm, that would be a twist huh? But who knows? Anyone could be suspicious at this point, keep your eye on everyone, ok? XD Yessss, they finally managed to separate those two, but not for long though. I like to imagine Ryo and Haruma had to hold him down, that kid is too clingy, you knoww? Anyhoodles thank you for the review! *Huggles*

Kumohime reviewed A Family Symbol? on Sep 26, 2013 04:04 PM [Report This]

So, now they are thinking it has something to do with a family name... Although if it's old kanji it wouln't really be an R just look like it, right? Mmmhh intriguing.

Massu, so negative. Although he might be right, not every house has a secret passage.

I'm getting more and more confused and I can't wait to see what happens!!
Author's Response: Lets hope they are close in their reasoning's, cause if not, they have to start back square one, and they'll never get out! *wails* Ok, I'm being dramatic.... but still. XD Massu is our little negative bird in the story, he pulls it off pretty well, huh? Ugh! I don't want to make you confused! *sad face* Hopefully with the next chapters it'll be all cleared up. And in case you don't see it, I just updated. XD Thank you for the review, they always mean a lot! *hearts*

ichigoyamada reviewed A Family Symbol? on Sep 23, 2013 10:59 AM [Report This]

Ooh!!!! It's more and more interesting!!! Family symbol and stuff~~~ wow~~~

O: Tegoshi & Hime is separated?!!! How??? xD

Haruma's question about Ryo's smile made me laughed xDD Yes Ryo, which part makes you happy??? xD

Ceil is really need some herbal tea... Dude, what happens with her?

Thanks for updated Ceil :D Another great chapter! Love this! *hearts* Gotta wait for another chapter!!! *hugs*
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you think it's keep getting interesting!! You'll find out how they separated in the next chapter. XD Who knows which part makes Ryo so happy, he's an odd fellow, you know. XD Maybe we should like cram some herbal tea down her throat, think that'll calm her down? Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and please look forward to the next one. *Hearts and Huggles*
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