Hime (and Ceil and Snow), the poster looks fabulous! Considering that you've not been on Photoshop for long, your artistic skills really have developed a lot. It looks super dark and mysterious, and the quote is awesome! Kind of reminds me of the Goosebumps covers; the ones with the green slime? Makes my skin crawl *shivers*
And onto the story- got to love frank Tegoshi; and I was just saying how we should develop the Hime X Tegoshi romance line! Saile on the Himeship? You get it? Hime and Tegoshi and ship mashed together...?
And congrats for Massu for coming out the closet! (No really, this whole yaoi line makes me/my character feel a lot better about ditching him) And I do feel bad for him about his past with Shige. Makes a lot more sense now, about Massu's fixation with sunrises. Though I did note how Pi was asking Massu a few questions of his own... Curious, aren't you, Pi? And I wonder why... *heavy sarcasm noted*
Poor Koyama and his failed relationship! Glad that he got help, though. In a way, both he and Snow were saved by their relationship. It's kind of the actual definition of mutual friendship, right? Though it's not romantic (yet), we can only hope!
Ryo's not-so-subtle-confession-that-was-about-his-ex was pretty dang obvious, hon. Though it makes more sense about his background, coming from a different life.
And I noticed that Cherry hasn't been talking a lot! Glad to get more conversation from her :)
I think you're really smart to bring in a relationship between you and Henry. Only because I'd probably kill any other female with a past with my baby. (Kidding, of course, I'm not THAT violent!) But even still- I feel jealous. Oooh, so jealous.
Author's Response: Hime did do great with the poster, and the banner, right? She's so amazing with darker themed things. I remember those! I used to read them all the time. XD All aboard the TegoHime! XD That's my way of saying I understand what you meant.... Yes, *claps for Massu* About time he came out of the closet (excluding his confession to Haruma and Kristy) Someone has to be curious right? Ceil isn't asking the questions, someone has to. XD Koyama and Snow remain friends because well.. he's too old for her, and my protective sister instincts are kicking in. XD Massu and Ryo had totally opposite experiences, huh? I know, I don;t have her talk much, but it's hard developing so many characters! XD But, she talks more later, you'll see.^^ Awee, don't be jealous, Ceil and Henry never dated, so don't worry, I'm not that stupid. You'll see what happened between those two soon too. Anyhoodles thank you for this review! And sorry for another long reply! *huggles*