Anna Clair reviewed Second teaser on Feb 11, 2013 01:18 AM [Report This]

Okay...so the feeling I get from here is something has gone terribly wrong and I'm guessing this whole scene with Selina takes place quite a bit after what happened last teaser?

It was perfect seeing Aiba and Sho taking Ohno out so carefully lmfao XD.

Nino actually sounds like such a caring and loving best friend I would totally give into him too...but it didn't feel like Selina was as into it as he was. More like she was just satisfying his desires.

I wonder what has happened though and why she refers to the clan head as Father...was it because he adopted her or he 'took' her in.

I'm curious to see the developments. (especially with Matsumoto coming in and punching out Nino lmfao XD)

Good job Jannieeee! You did excellently

Anna Clair reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 11, 2013 01:05 AM [Report This]

This is very very exciting!

Now I'm writing this as I've finished reading so I'll give my overall impressions of the chapter.

It was very exciting. Each daughter had her own sort of storyline, genre that you were playing around with. Emma's was thriller, Ayu's also focused on thriller but I felt more of a mystery vibe coming from it, Christine's felt like discovery, Talia's felt like action and adventure and a sci-fi piece, Lillith's started off light hearted and normal but ended on a vengeful tone, and Selina's was definitely almost a mixture of all the above which tied off this first teaser excellently :) The most interesting aspect of it being that Jun did most of the narration similar to Emma/Ayu's teasers - which makes me feel like the way their stories pan out will be quite similar

I'm really looking forward to the second one :) and what Bloodlines is all about

Ooper reviewed Second teaser on Nov 17, 2012 04:20 AM [Report This]

BEAUTIFUL. More soon, Jannie! You're killing me with the suspense!!!!!!!

Lil Daisy reviewed Second teaser on Nov 14, 2012 05:01 AM [Report This]

likingit so far. looking forward to the updates.

Christine reviewed Second teaser on Nov 13, 2012 06:50 AM [Report This]

Woahhhhh
this is really intense!!!
I wonder what happened between Selina and Jun?
Update soon!!!

Blossy reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 29, 2012 03:08 PM [Report This]

WHOA! Best teaser ever!

Each scene left you with a cliffy! A really omg-what-the-hell-happens-next!

All the guys are either out to kill the girls or have something up their sleeves.

AND OMG TOMA IN BED WITH ANOTHER WOMAN? THAT IS SO WRONG! LILLITH IS EITHER GOING TO KILL HIM OR... WELL KILL HIM!

When are you planning to start posting up the story? I just can't wait now!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Ayu! Long time no hear! Real life has been crazy so not much time for writing. Definitely when things have settled down, will get to back to this definitely. So please wait for it!

Christine reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 13, 2012 04:59 PM [Report This]

Ahhh I love the beginning!!!
I can't wait for more Jannie!!
This sounds really interesting!
update soon *hearts*
Author's Response: Thanks Chri. Pls wait patiently for it! <3

Ninner reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 12, 2012 11:29 PM [Report This]

Omg this is so EXCITING!!!!!!
OMG I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE FIRST CHAPTER COMES OUT. I AM SO. FREAKING. EXCITED. OMG THIS IS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME.
Author's Response: Thankies Ninner! Hope I won't disappoint!
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