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Anna Clair reviewed The Key on May 06, 2012 02:03 PM [Report This]

OH MY GOD THE TIME MACHINE ONE :D? OMG OMG

DUDE. OMG.

I DON'T UNDERSTAND IS THAT WEIRD? I JUST WANNA KNOW MORE AND AT THE SAME TIME I'M LIKE I DO KNOW MORE AND I'M LIKE MESHING THE MORE AND THE MORE IN MY HEAD AND I'M LIKE OMG.

Okay so enough spazzing. But yeah I know what you mean this plot has a LOT of potential. There's a whole world of stuff that could happen with time travelling and etc. :D

This is a wonderfully written prompt and if you want to elaborate on it even further Jannie I think you should do it! You seem so inspired by this!

THE SHUN! THE SHUN WAS PERFECT! The Jun shook and I felt his tremors and Hikki's insanity as the timelines blur and she can't tell what she is or where she is anymore in the world.

PERFECTIONNN
Author's Response: I am so glad it lived it up as a small follow up to your story. I guess your little story planted a seed in my head and this popped up! Thank you! Arg....now I have too much to write on! Lol!

Ooper reviewed The Key on May 05, 2012 08:49 PM [Report This]

Beautifully written! Awesome job on this, Jannie!
Author's Response: Thank you bb!

Christine reviewed The Key on May 05, 2012 03:04 PM [Report This]

AHHHHH
beautiful continuation Jannie
Again the ending was shocking and had an impact!!
Good job!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was what I was looking for. Might not as be as fluid as Lilith but hopefully something as good!
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