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for_one_purpose reviewed Chapter 1: The Beginning of an Unforgettable Day on Sep 24, 2012 03:35 PM [Report This]

hi! i just think i should at least drop one final comment in appreciation of your generous hardwork in completing Flight 109.

i should say i am at lost of words of what to say. i dont know what to feel. for one thing you did tremendously well in narrating all those 3 important characters of their views in things. i understood them well, thanks to you, and that made me feel... i dont know, more understanding of how good this story has ended; with all the characters being wrapped up just normally of how 3 those 3 normal people should be; if you know what i mean.

but yeah. you were right there. in every breakups there would always be awkwardness that each exes would have to overcome. however, time is always the best healer for those emotional tensions that we human feel. i just wish they all will move on and lead life without regrets, if they are ever a living human that is...hahaha.

ok. before i get more carried away, i better say what i'm here to say. GOOD JOB there author! i'm proud to say that i love how it ends. bittersweet is always an awesome feeling. :)

well that is it. i wish u well in ur RL and works and others. thanks for sharing ur writings.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. And for reading my fics. I am glad that you enjoyed it ^^ I personally like how it turns out. It's.. subtle. I hate it when things end up too fantastical, happily ever after, real life doesn't work that way. But I know it might not be everyone's cup of tea, people likes to dream the fairy tale ending in this kind of stories. So i am glad if I don't disappoint you ^^ I am sorry for making you wait so long for the final update (that's kinda angsty XD) And no, they are never living human beings. LOL they are all fictional. Including this version of Arashi/Jun/etc. Thank you again, really, thank you. Writing is such a pleasure when you can find that you can connect with someone, a reader, whom I've never met before and probably millions of miles away and find mutual compassion for something. Thank you for being that someone ^^
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. And for reading my fics. I am glad that you enjoyed it ^^ I personally like how it turns out. It's.. subtle. I hate it when things end up too fantastical, happily ever after, real life doesn't work that way. But I know it might not be everyone's cup of tea, people likes to dream the fairy tale ending in this kind of stories. So i am glad if I don't disappoint you ^^ I am sorry for making you wait so long for the final update (that's kinda angsty XD) And no, they are never living human beings. LOL they are all fictional. Including this version of Arashi/Jun/etc. Thank you again, really, thank you. Writing is such a pleasure when you can find that you can connect with someone, a reader, whom I've never met before and probably millions of miles away and find mutual compassion for something. Thank you for being that someone ^^

for_one_purpose reviewed Chapter 1: The Beginning of an Unforgettable Day on Sep 20, 2012 02:58 PM [Report This]

hey! i saw on ur lj u've managed to put up da last chappie. i'm thrilled!! but sad to say somehow i cant read them. why is it? if u know how for me, a non-friend of ur lj, to read, can u pls make it possible? believe me. i've been waiting for da update for da longest time ever. and still waiting. having hopes high for you.. anyway, a thank u in advance to u if u can make it possible for me to read it. i love ur stories!!

ps: for ur old question about OC fics, yeah. i love reading OC fics. well they are normally easier for us readers to relate and do da whole imagining things..hahaha.

see you later! toodles~
Author's Response: Hi! wow, it amazed me that someone noticed that i put up some links LOL Well the truth is noone is able to read it yet but me because i set it to private. The update is in 3 parts and i have done with the two parts. I haven't finished the last part and will put it as public if i have finished it ^^ Which I hope is going to be soon. Thank you for not giving up on my fic!

for_one_purpose reviewed Chapter 24: Romeo and Juliet Didn't Have a Healthy Relationship on Apr 26, 2012 11:11 AM [Report This]

hi again. i know this might bother u and i know it might be troublesome too. but i cant help missing ur update on ur lj. hope u can find sometime to update da story. i miss it. seriously. eager to know how it ends. with ur RL works and all, i understand. but ur story is an addiction. hope to see da update soon!
Author's Response: It didnt bother me at all (^ ^) i was losing motivation to write because i thought people have forgotten about already anyway XD yes RL has been so hectic as well that i am losing sleep and all that. But i will try to update soon. Thank you for your addiction. Do u usually read OC fics?

vickyvicky reviewed Chapter 24: Romeo and Juliet Didn't Have a Healthy Relationship on Feb 14, 2012 02:58 AM [Report This]

OMG! this was soooooooo good :)
Author's Response: I am glad if you enjoyed it ^^ Thank you for reading it

for_one_purpose reviewed Chapter 1: The Beginning of an Unforgettable Day on Dec 20, 2011 01:32 PM [Report This]

hey. i've been following your stories both on/off screen and flight 109 on your lj. but i i dont have lj so kind of thought that maybe i can post a review on your newest update for flight 109 here. so here goes. please dont be mad to hear my thoughts... ;)

as far as chap 17 flight 109, does this means rei is out of da picture already? seriously???
i love her. but oh well. da writer is da one to control the fate of this amazing story.

i kind of felt not-so-suprise by that chap. kinda figure that you will choose minako. but still. i feel it's a bit waste to just give a desperately-just-let-it-go kind of ending for rei. why not you give her another chance to show her own charm, that not only minako can be strong. but rei too has her own way of succumbing to her fate and fight for what she thinks is right not just for herself but for jun as well. i would love to see that. honestly, what ever the ending shall be, do please leave a great impression for all the OC characters. you should give credits to yourself for being able to create such a remarkably strong-willed OCs who both have their own charms that blew away the heart of so many people...

oh,oh. one more thing. i kind of want to see how the reaction of all other arashi members towards jun's decision and rei's acceptance to that. by other members i would mean sho, ohno and aiba. nino would most probably just act like how a best friend for rei is supposed to be.she doesnt have anyone else to go cry herself on.

i'm seriously wondering how sho would react. well, you kind of potrayed him to have such a great impression on rei n have faith on her relationship with jun. that's why i think it would be nice to see his reaction to the situation. plus, judging by your skill in writing, i know that you'll be able to throw some of those bittersweet moments when you write this.

no pressure. i'm just saying that it would be lovely to have you include these ideas. what ever your thought is, i know you'll be able to put really nice seasonings and spices to the story.

really love your stories both on/off screen and flight 109. update soon!!!
Author's Response: HI! First of all, thank you so much for going all the trouble to leave me a wonderful response here about my writings :D I am very happy that you did this. And please, don't hold back because I think your response is very sincere yet thorough and the least I would feel is to feel mad about it. About your questions ( i hope my answers would not contain spoilers) 1. Rei being out of the picture If you are asking whether they broke up, yes, they did. If it is whether Rei won't appear in the next chapter, no, she will definitely appears because I still owe her character something which is what you more or less suggested in your next question/request :) So I hope I won't disappoint you with my next chap, which will be the last chap. Thank you for reminding me not to forget her completely XD as I tend to go overboard on things. This is one of the things I love about fanfiction writing, how readers and authors can have a certain connection that a reader can somehow affect how the writer writes and the writer gets a clue what her/his readers are expecting. I am actually not so sure of myself on how to end this fic a few months ago with all the strong response against Minako and Jun. It perhaps explains my long hiatus. I mean yeah I have work as well, but going against people's expectations is kinda.. well it's kinda hard, maybe, in a way. But the thing is, I have decided already on the ending of this fic the moment I decided the title of the fic. It has said it all with the "destination: first love" bit. It is about a journey to the past. And I feel uncomfortable to just let everything wrap up nicely with Rei after all the drama. And I personally think Rei herself is better than that. better than being a second choice to someone. 2. Arashi members Actually they will be the main point of the next chap :) I hope I don't spoil it much for you XD Again, thank you for going all the troubles to leave me this comment. I will try to update as soon as I can (or as soon as the mood comes XD) and I am really really happy that you like what I write. I hope I won't disappoint you with the ending of the fic. Thank you for reading! Btw, pressure is not a bad thing. It what makes a person be able to do beyond what he/she can do. Well that's what I believe :)

vickyvicky321 reviewed Chapter 14: How To Say That 4 Letter Word on Sep 27, 2011 01:03 AM [Report This]

This is a really good story! Please keep writing! I'm posting a Matsumoto story as well, when it gets validated, please read it! You're story is REALLY good, keep at it!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review :) I am glad that you like it. I've posted the next chap and will post the other chaps soon. And I'm looking forward to read your Matsumoto story!

Lily-nee reviewed Chapter 1: The Beginning of an Unforgettable Day on Aug 11, 2011 08:43 PM [Report This]

Hello ! ^^
Nobody reviewed your fic so far ? Unbelievable o.O *Lily shock !*
Well, just to tell you that I've already began translating (couldn't wait XD).
I've seen a little mistake in this chapter. All chapter is in Rei's point of view, but their is one line which is written in the third person : "Mariko gives Rei a pat on her shoulder before leaving her alone." ^__^
That's all~
It's nice to read this story again :D
See you~
Lily
Author's Response: Thx for pointing it out Lily :) Will correct that one ASAP :D Yeah it is kinda quiet here, isn't it? XD
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