nice story...

Great story...

evening dear...
nice one shot
beautifully written storyline with superb characters
love the ending >3

Excellent job. Suited well and motive understood

The moral was perfect. I think it could go two ways. Boys can b too ambitious too. Excellent. Enjoyed it.

wow this is a really good story! it has a moral. you should write more moral-ish stories.

Thanks for a one good story. Must know how to juggle between career and family as a woman so does the man.

Blossy! Good job on this on! I love how the song ifts nicely into the story (I'm very tempted to do this challenge, but I suck at making this work like you do) It's a cool story! I'm a fan of real-life examples (makes everything seems real) and the character development was good! :D