lovely_tess reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 07, 2012 03:29 AM [Report This]

nice story...

BubblyMiko reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 22, 2011 02:00 PM [Report This]

Great story...

cahaya reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 04, 2011 11:17 AM [Report This]

evening dear...
nice one shot
beautifully written storyline with superb characters
love the ending >3

Akuma_no_Onna reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 10, 2011 05:59 PM [Report This]

Excellent job. Suited well and motive understood

Kyute-ee reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 29, 2011 03:50 AM [Report This]

The moral was perfect. I think it could go two ways. Boys can b too ambitious too. Excellent. Enjoyed it.

ivyx3 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 26, 2011 11:29 PM [Report This]

wow this is a really good story! it has a moral. you should write more moral-ish stories.

romantic swan reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 25, 2011 03:24 PM [Report This]

Thanks for a one good story. Must know how to juggle between career and family as a woman so does the man.

iscream reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 25, 2011 01:23 PM [Report This]

Blossy! Good job on this on! I love how the song ifts nicely into the story (I'm very tempted to do this challenge, but I suck at making this work like you do) It's a cool story! I'm a fan of real-life examples (makes everything seems real) and the character development was good! :D
Author's Response: Thanks iscream^^ But try making one and see. You might actually be good you know... I never thought I could do it myself... Lately I've been adding a lot of real-life events though those stories aren't up yet^^
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