biniBningPunkista reviewed Prerequisite to Wed on Aug 18, 2011 09:43 AM [Report This]

i know this review is late. i know i wasn't able to read this as soon as i saw it in my email. i know i am a crappy person for being that... and most of all I KNOW how wonderful this story is!!!

...and i love love love every bit of it.

i'm really sorry for this very very late feedback. i've been waiting out myself to enjoy this fan fic since i've been gutting myself up on being too busy. it's been 2 months past and i still haven't let myself enjoy your story. thank you so much for this present!!!!!!!!! *hugs*

now on to the story:

what made me like it was the simple story line. i like the fact that Mao didn't say yes the moment Toma asked her for marriage. though i would have like it if the proposal came first before the pregnancy announcement, i like the fact that Toma proved himself to Mao that he loved her enough to marry her without a baby to reason that out.

i myself am thinking of what if this situation happens to me. what do i do? would i have probably said no as well? it takes guts to say no in the first place when you need someone to take responsibility for a baby. so here, i love Mao's pride as a woman. you were able to put up her character in a higher ground than she already is in.

thank you so much for this...

i am also motivated to fix up my fic and continue on with my own stories because of this! thank you thank you!!!!
Author's Response: late or not, i'm still really glad you got time to read this story...
and i'm glad you liked it...
like i said. the concept came from my mom's rantings... which is why the pregnancy came first before the actual proposal... (although the thought came before that... lol)
anyway, thank you for liking it too... :)
and thank you for that last sentence... :)
looking forward to your stories... (especially 'that' one... *grins*)

maohartjun reviewed Prerequisite to Wed on Jul 15, 2011 01:13 AM [Report This]

Oh what can I say but 'amazing' that I love this one-shot story. Although its Mao/Toma pairing I can live with that hihi & I find that I totally agree that you don't have to marry just cause your pregnant I mean if it ain't planned then its something to consider before taking that step into marriage & longlife as a couple. Even tho' Mao's pov of Toma's proposal was what she was thinking Toma had it differently but it took a few people to give her their inside look of how they became married but most of all I really love how Toma kind of told her its not 'need to' but its 'want to' so I am glad that Toma loves her enough to go through all the heartache of rejection hihi but Mao finally said 'YES' .... *blush* sorry I know my review is a bit longer but I kind of like this story & I enjoyed reading it too.

Thankyou for the awesome read (^_^)
Author's Response: glad you liked it...

Magzhydfan reviewed Prerequisite to Wed on Jun 29, 2011 01:21 AM [Report This]

love it, thanks And belated happy birthday to Bnbning Punkista.
Author's Response: glad you liked it! thanks! :)

mmizuki951101 reviewed Prerequisite to Wed on Jun 27, 2011 03:44 PM [Report This]

Love it!!!! Whooooo!!!
Author's Response: thanks mizuki! :)

Lil Daisy reviewed Prerequisite to Wed on Jun 24, 2011 03:42 AM [Report This]

awwww such a cute story ^^
Author's Response: thank you... :)
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