i know this review is late. i know i wasn't able to read this as soon as i saw it in my email. i know i am a crappy person for being that... and most of all I KNOW how wonderful this story is!!!
...and i love love love every bit of it.
i'm really sorry for this very very late feedback. i've been waiting out myself to enjoy this fan fic since i've been gutting myself up on being too busy. it's been 2 months past and i still haven't let myself enjoy your story. thank you so much for this present!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
now on to the story:
what made me like it was the simple story line. i like the fact that Mao didn't say yes the moment Toma asked her for marriage. though i would have like it if the proposal came first before the pregnancy announcement, i like the fact that Toma proved himself to Mao that he loved her enough to marry her without a baby to reason that out.
i myself am thinking of what if this situation happens to me. what do i do? would i have probably said no as well? it takes guts to say no in the first place when you need someone to take responsibility for a baby. so here, i love Mao's pride as a woman. you were able to put up her character in a higher ground than she already is in.
thank you so much for this...
i am also motivated to fix up my fic and continue on with my own stories because of this! thank you thank you!!!!
Author's Response: late or not, i'm still really glad you got time to read this story...
and i'm glad you liked it...
like i said. the concept came from my mom's rantings... which is why the pregnancy came first before the actual proposal... (although the thought came before that... lol)
anyway, thank you for liking it too... :)
and thank you for that last sentence... :)
looking forward to your stories... (especially 'that' one... *grins*)