Lol Mao's having pregnancy cravings... physical ones xD
>_< what has happened... im starting to root for jun... I was so against him at first but now i find myself goin: "YES!! ASK HER TO MOVE IN WITH YOU!!!"
He was quite adorable trying to choose the right words ^^
"Though already made, his proposal lingered."
I loved that sentence!! i dont know why but it was just really beatiful and simple and something that hit me.
Damn... "“Also, I have a request.” I was getting all pervy thinking she was gonna follow Ming Yues advice.
Awww even the baby loves Ming Yue! I do too, altho im worried about what's wrong with her now :/ Could she be pregnant too? Then the babies could be like sisters! or siblings... if he's a boy.
There's a meaning behind the purple`?? omo... Maos place had lavender details too right...
The way theyre acting in their, or well...matsumotos, apartment is really fitting. Kind of awkward, with everything filled with memories and old habits that are hard to erase. Like theyre trying to act like acquaintances when its impossible.
Her heart was far from ready to post up a vacancy notice.
^ THAT WAS AN AWESOME METAPHOR!! It just proves your writing is superb.
LOVE ACTUALLY!!! I LOVE THAT MOVIE!!
And then how he brought the movie for her and asked if they'd watch it together... It's like they're being so careful with words and emotions that its touching when such little words always hold a big meaning for them. Oh and how they addressed each other's by their first names, it was so touching.
Kukiko... It's kind of sad. In a way i dislike her character and in a way I pity her, but then theres that part of me that admires the way she says the cold things inside her. I wish her ex-husband would keep trying with her until he melts the coldness around her heart, cause they both love each other.
I hope you're gonna update soon!! I love reading your chapters, there's so much to them that i have a ton of feelings after finishing.
I wrote the review but then it didnt all get submitted so i posted it again... lol... im useless
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! While this fanfic is over 3 yo now, I'm not giving up on the thought of finishing it. ^^