hunnyhugs reviewed Chapter 1 on May 11, 2011 05:49 PM [Report This]

ahahahaaaa...its very amusing..
love the story twist and turn...

Sakiyah reviewed Chapter 1 on May 11, 2011 03:46 PM [Report This]

b, u amaze meh! loved da story girl! was so gud!

Tanniyah reviewed Chapter 1 on May 09, 2011 04:38 PM [Report This]

Omo!

The longest one-shot ever lol

I loved it.
It had crazyness everywhere!

Ryo's dream was hilarious.
Ayu was bossy as ever!

Jin and Yamapi were there, even more better!

Ayu had her happily ever after finally with Ryo.
Good thing he finally realised his feelings when she confessed.

Omo!
LMAO! Ayu and Ryo's moms are classic!
I love them!!

satoshigent reviewed Chapter 1 on May 09, 2011 05:10 AM [Report This]

i enjoyed reading this dear! :))) another one-shot excellently written. :))
their squabbles brought me back to their Ryuusei no Kizuna promotion days. :) hahaha!. Thank you!
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