LOL. Who did ruin the moment? I'm so curious!
So overall story. Cause I read it all and the beginning was pretty capturing. Christine's little fantasies are hilarious. Pi turning into a jackass midway was sooo unexpected but so working for the over all plot still. Mao makes me laugh too much because she's a party girl. Ryo makes funny comments. The two of them need to get together and stop dancing around the issue. (SHOULD NOT BE SAYING THAT BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT I DID IN YLIMD so.) but honestly I like it. You story? I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT.
There were so many moments where I could not hold back my lol. Like Mao talking about porn videos at Jun's house. Or Ryo being adorable up there ^. Pi threeway kissing. Christine's office sex fantasy. Like honestly. SO MUCH LOLS.
And awww he has a kid! No wonder he doesn't commit easily because then the kid would have another woman in her life!
So. Update soon. XD.
Author's Response: Muhahaha yeah that's still a secret hehe, thanks for your review though, I haven't been writing lately and your review actually made me think of starting to write again.
So yh pi was a total jackass in Hawaii, no holidays with pi is my suggestion XDD No just kidding it's still going to get even more complicated after this chapter, just warning in advance if you thought this was already being messed up, it's about to get even more messed up bb.
But I'm really glad you liked my story and I hope you'll continue enjoying it, if I ever get to update the next chapter that is, and for the record i'm so engrossed with YLIMD, please updateeeeeeeeeeee I'LL LOVE U FOREVER!! It's getting so freaking tensive, and I can't even start guessing what the outcome will be DX
As for my story, I like to have some humor in my story's it makes everything a little less tensed all the time, Mao and Ryo are definitely the prankers in this story imo. Ryo usually has a pestering role in all my story's tbh xD. Office sex FTW <333 Lmao the threeway kissing was really a random idea i suddenly got, I still don't know why I had the urge to make such a womanizer of pi muhahah but it turned out too fit in the story so I'm not complaining heheh.
Anyway continue reading and enjoying my story!! Thnx for the review~ And I'll try to update soon!