i like it!! Yeah, that's almost exactly how i want it to be :)
however, i got a little confused in some parts..
She leaned over and wiped the soup dollop that was on the side of his mouth with her hand and looked down shyly at the bowl of hotpot that was between them. When she felt the silence between them grow tense for a second she looked back up at him and shrugged. “It was bugging me too.” --- who's the she? Seohyun or Shinhye?
And did Yonghwa suddenly go up stage? If he did, where was he before?
I'm sorry for being such a fool, Lillith. I'm just not good with many pronoun xD
anyway, thank you for this fic! Oh, i'm glad you're head over heels with Yongseo ;)
Author's Response: YAY I'm so glad you liked it! Merry Christmas nizzy <33
It's okay man sometimes when I write I totally forget to include little bits and this time T.T i had written the story out but it got accidentally deleted so i had to rewrite it at 5 in the morning and I wasn't sure if I put all the things in the old version in the new version =D I added them back right now but I'll let you know on here =D
The girl in that scene was Seohyun I was kind of trying to recreate that scene where they ate hotpot together i think O.O? i'm not too sure there was no audio in the video I saw T.T
and yeah =D he came out of the wings beside the stage when he saw her fall.
NOOO don't even worry please I'm horrible at describing things properly =D you helped me. thank you so much =D I'm so glad you liked it =D
(And YongSeo are freaking hot together O.O Seriously I have a whole new perspective on Yonghwa after researching him and watching so many variety shows)
Thank you for reviewing *bows*