Hey gurllll. Guess what? I'm finally reading your story! Wooooot! ( I think my reviews will suck a bit more than usual and i'll write shorter ones T.T i hope you wont mind)
I like the setting and the mystery of the girl. As well as Tegoshi. And how they kiss. I don't know... that gives it a touch that reminds me of a certain type of film style? You know a really sensual cool indie type thing and I'm not making any sense I'm sorry.
Tegoshi's personality and his interest in the girl are interesting.
I guess he just goes as far as sort of bullying her to get what he wants.
"Fine. Use your minions if you will."
I loved that line ^
And I suppose their relationship is a mix of something sexual and elementary school or kindergarten crushes.
I guess their fight sorta shows that too.
Hahahahahha! His mom is cool. And makes his son feel just the right amount of awkward ;)
Aaaand ofc you make Tegoshi scared of spiders hahahah!
AWWWWWWW!! He's so adorable when he talks to her *squeals* His apology was kinda cute too.
THE ENDING WAS ADORBS! Thank you for a great story, Hime!
Author's Response: LOL you finally are hahaha and no, your review did not suck xD
sensual cool indie type? Mmmhhh maybe hahaha
He is a bit of a bully isn't he and he sure doesn't like to lose even in this :P
Yes, they are both big babies in a lot of ways haha, but otherwise, the story would have ended up being way too angsty maybe
Moms that make their kids feel awkward are awesome... when they are not your own ahahaha
I'm happy you liked it!! Thank you for reading and commenting *throws hearts* hahaha