impressive story. it managed to make me feel the sadness that dara had to go through and it also made me smirk when Jiyong said those cheesy lines. anyway, nie job.though there were some grammatical errors. But, still understandable. n_n
BubblyMiko reviewed Get Married, Dara! on Feb 28, 2012 01:14 PM [Report This]
Aww....such a sweet story. I really loved it! ^^ Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: since I'm myself is a big fan of sweet stories, having you to compliment me like this... :)))) thank you!
BubblyMiko reviewed All I Want For Christmas on Dec 22, 2011 02:15 PM [Report This]
Author's Response: Hi BubblyMiko :)
Thank you for your smiley face :) I'm glad this story made you smile. :)
“Are you thinking that this is a dream, Zuki-baka?” = lol he read her mind
“Come on, let’s ditch them and go to the cafeteria on our own,” Keito suggested and without waiting for her response, he was already dragging her out of the classroom. “They’re either hot or cold with each other,” Miki muttered under her breath. = lol got the meaning of the title now. Thought it was because they were in a cold place
Yay Ryo is here!
“Don’t be such a girl!” “I am a girl!” = love their relationship
Ayumu is here too!
“Sensei, I’m in love aren’t I. Love makes people do stupid things,” she heard Keito say. = that sounded like an obvious misunderstanding.
“She already has a guy she loves to bits,” he informed her. “I think what you heard could be wrong.” “Yes, the guy she loves is sexy, gorgeous and rich. She’s really in love with him. Everyone in the resort knows about him.” = lol he's talking about himself.
“Yes, why shouldn’t he? I’m beautiful and smart. A great combination, don’t you think?” = I don't need to guess who her husband is lol
“This time they’re betting on kissing,” Ryosuke commented with a roll of his eyes. They didn’t comprehend what they heard. “Yes, same ol’, same ol’,” Miki repeated. Suddenly her eyes widened. “Wait, when was kissing the same as before?” she shrieked. They all looked at each other all with the identical stunned look. “Maybe something happened when we left,” Yuto mumbled, still in shock. = lol that cracked me up. A LOT of things happened! Too bad their friends not about to share with them